Narrative (Story)
Independent Construction of the Text (ICoT)
Independent Construction of the Text (ICoT)
You just heard the atmosphere of the Citarum River in the past. Use those sounds in your story. You are free to choose your character, but remember: the story must be set in the 'Swampy Land'
The Secret Guide of Karaba-wang
(Orientation) Long ago, before Karawang became a busy city, I lived near the grand Citarum River. I was a young fisherman. The land was wild and dominated by thick forests. Every day, I saw merchants from China and India passing through the mysterious swamps in their big boats.
(Complication) One dark night, the weather was unpredictable. A heavy rain started to fall. Suddenly, a wise man named Sheikh Quro approached my boat. He brought a message of peace, but he looked worried. He needed to cross the deep swamps to reach the village, but the path was dangerous. I decided to help him. We pushed my boat through the tall grass. The water splashed loudly, and the wind blew through the trees.
(Resolution) I guided him carefully because I knew the secret paths of the "Swampy Land." After many hours, we arrived safely at the village. Sheikh Quro thanked me for my bravery.
(Coda/Moral) I learned that even a simple fisherman could help a great man. The wild swamps provided safety to those who knew the land well.
The teacher provides a small card to ensure students use the language features from the original text:
[ ] Past Tense: Did I use verbs like walked, arrived, guided, was?
[ ] Adjectives: Did I use adjectives like mysterious, thick, vast, wild?
[ ] Time Connectives: Did I include words like Once upon a time, One day, or Finally?
[ ] The Vibe: Does my story sound like a legend or an adventure?
Guided Creativity: Students aren't confused about where to start because the setting is already established (The Swampy Land), yet they have the freedom to create their own characters.
Integrated Listening: By hearing the sounds of oars or rain before writing, they are more likely to use sensory words (splashed, loud, dark) that make their narrative come alive.
Independence: Students prove they have "mastered" the genre without further teacher assistance